Death's sorrow has potential
this song needs to not be dragged out, you could possibly start the progression earlier like after 1 minute instead of 2, with the same beat for the first 2 minutes i almost cried, then i liked it after that then almost cried again, lol and towards the end it would be nice to throw in some more intense piano or another instrument, i like the piano but it dosent progress, throw in a piano solo, do some crazy breakdown so that this song will make you want to listen to it more than twice, i like all the sounds and there really isnt anything negative about it except that its so slow that it hurts. ha ha hope you can do something constructive from my rambling, ha ha